Unexpected jolts
Frightened faces cluster out
Mouths in terror shout!
Mouths in terror shout
Off goes men’s sense of humor
Shaken by tremor!
Shaken by tremor
Makeshift tents form residence
‘All One’—evidence!
‘All One’—evidence
Bungalow or slums erase mark
Fact was so stark!
Fact was so stark
Arrogance of yesterday
Melting by the day!
Melting by the day
Tremor in high, shocking volts
Unexpected jolts!
Unexpected jolts
Frightened faces cluster out
Mouths in terror shout!
© Chiranjibi Kafle (27th April 2015 )
“Arrogance of …… by the day” so very true 🙂
BTW what form is this, i was wondering 🙂
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Thank you so much, my dear friend. Actually it is my own experimentation with haiku, or say linked haiku. I prefer to call it circular linked haiku with a tentative rhyme-scheme of abb,bcc, cdd and so on. In some cases, the rhyme-scheme is also varied to aba, aca, ada, and so on. I’m not sure if the international readership or academia will accept it but I dared take this venture. Normally my circular linked haikus are framed in seven stanzas. Love your inquiry 🙂 (and please see the first sequel as well…)
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I truly am enlightened 🙂 and about it being accepted, I think somebody has to start somewhere …. and all the current forms were experimented by someone somewhere and accepted at a point of time:)
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You are right. Thanks for reassuring. Love,
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