Quake 2015 — II

Unexpected jolts

Frightened faces cluster out

Mouths in terror shout!

Mouths in terror shout

Off goes men’s sense of humor

Shaken by tremor!

Shaken by tremor

Makeshift tents form residence

‘All One’—evidence!

‘All One’—evidence

Bungalow or slums erase mark

Fact was so stark!

Fact was so stark

Arrogance of yesterday

Melting by the day!

Melting by the day

Tremor in high, shocking volts

Unexpected jolts!

Unexpected jolts

Frightened faces cluster out

Mouths in terror shout!

 © Chiranjibi Kafle                       (27th April 2015 )

4 thoughts on “Quake 2015 — II

    1. Thank you so much, my dear friend. Actually it is my own experimentation with haiku, or say linked haiku. I prefer to call it circular linked haiku with a tentative rhyme-scheme of abb,bcc, cdd and so on. In some cases, the rhyme-scheme is also varied to aba, aca, ada, and so on. I’m not sure if the international readership or academia will accept it but I dared take this venture. Normally my circular linked haikus are framed in seven stanzas. Love your inquiry 🙂 (and please see the first sequel as well…)

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      1. I truly am enlightened 🙂 and about it being accepted, I think somebody has to start somewhere …. and all the current forms were experimented by someone somewhere and accepted at a point of time:)

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